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Getting Naked with Fortune Cookies – The Excerpts (1)

Dee Dawning, back with the promised two-fer excerpts. One for my erotic chick-lit, Fortune Cookies and one for my upcoming erotic, contemporary novel, Getting Naked at the Hilton. Sandwiched between the two is another review excerpt from one of the many reviews on Fortune Cookies.

Fortune Cookies, It’s a Hoot
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Excerpt from Prologue: (Warning, Scorcher!!! Over 18 Only, Please)

Without warning the chill of fear surged through her entire body. She sensed someone or something was in the room with her. Her eyes roamed around the apartment spying nothing, yet the feeling increased. A frigid breeze gave her goose flesh. She felt damp and looked down. “What the …” She was naked. What happened to my gown? She was naked, shivering and clammy.

Then, a cloud of vapor appeared and an apparition materialized. An odd-looking Chinese man abruptly materialized before her unbelieving eyes. Modestly, she positioned her left arm across her naked breasts and right hand over her pubis. The man was middle aged, about five-six, sporting a long Fu Manchu mustache and matching pigtails. He was clothed in somewhat older traditional Chinese attire.

“Who are you? How did you get in here?” Out of the corner of her eye, she noticed movement. Beyond him in the corner – there was a silhouette … no, it was more like someone’s shadow, blending in with other shadows behind and to the right of the peculiar little man.
He bowed, and said in hurried, broken English, “Not to worry, Jill. Me, Eddie, eat this please.” He knows my name. He passed a small object to her. For some reason, Jill couldn’t seem to focus her eyes on it. She could only determine its color — red. To her surprise, she ingested it without question. “Aww, so pretty! You will make your man very happy.” Eddie turned. At his direction, the shadow approached and came into the light. It was a man and he, like she, was naked. He was tall, his body was lean, sensuous and he stood erect, but like the red object, She couldn’t make out the features of his face.

Settling on the far end of the couch, She could sense he was studying her. If I could only see his face. Fortunately, her fear had diminished, along with the cold. Friendly warmth had replaced the chill. Eddie imparted a matching red object to the man, which he consumed. Then in the next instant, Eddie vanished, leaving Jill alone with the sexy, naked man.

The Stranger slid along the couch coming closer. As his hip touched hers she felt a thrilling sensation. He had a pungent, sensual aroma. It made her think of sex. He slowly reached over and grasped her left hand, forcing a shiver up her spine as he pulled her arm away from her breasts.

“Nice.”

Angst replaced her fear as he moved even closer. With his face within inches, he rubbed the back of his hand across her cheek and lips. Stroking her hair, he leaned in and nibbled on her earlobe. Her nipples tingled. As if sensing this, he touched her now exposed breasts, moving his fingers in a circular motion around her protruding nipples and sending shockwaves to her privates.
Then, his tongue began a slow moist descent to her breasts. When his lips encircled her nipple, he took it into the warmth of his mouth; she swooned, nearly losing consciousness. Like a morning fog, desire had descended upon her, replacing her anxiety with lust.

Fortune Cookies It’s a Hoot!
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Fortune Cookies Review Excerpt

I love how Ms. Dawning allows the characters to tell their own stories, giving us an intimate view into their thoughts and emotions. Just when we think each lady is getting a happily ever after, a few weird adversaries are thrown into the picture…wacko exes and love struck sex partners just fly out of the woodworks!

FORTUNE COOKIES has a Sex in the City feel to it and is really well written. The stories flow smoothly, and the characters grab your attention and won’t let go. Each of the women is distinct and beautiful in her own way. Rita is a beautiful supermodel who has a heart of gold. Jill is the understanding and forgiving type who is the most supportive of the group. Gail is the intelligent and sassy go-getter. While Sandy, on the other hand, is the wealthy socialite who is unhappy despite her numerous possessions.

The sex scenes do not overpower the plot and are vivid enough to get you interested but not explicit enough to get you aroused. I’ve only touched on the story and can’t begin to give you all of the details. I didn’t even mention the other members of the Sexy Six. Nor did I mention what happens when each of the partners becomes attracted to the other members of the Fantastic Four. Well, you have to just read it to find out.

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Excerpt, Getting Naked at the Hilton (unedited)

Stood Up? No fucking way. I scrutinized my watch for the umpteenth time; as if the minute hand would go backward instead of forward and I would not yet have been stood up. Eleven-forty-five was not eleven o’clock. Where the fuck is she? Again, my eyes roamed the bar searching for her curvy form heading my way.

Could she have had car trouble? No, she’d have called. My jaw tightened in denial, though the inexorable fact of her ‘no show’ proved I had indeed been stood up. Too bad, I really liked Carol, her casual attire but formal appearance, with not a hair of her highlighted page boy out of place, her sexy blue eyes and friendly smile.

As I tapped my fingers impatiently on the bar and glanced around again…God is paying you back for all those wicked, sinful one night stands. My Reverend Pat Robertson whispered in my ear.

I felt a flush of annoyance across my face “Fuck you Reverend Robertson! And fuck the horse you rode in on. What’s that Pat? You’re can’t ride a horse. Well… well then fuck Carol too!”

“You sound rather perturbed.” A smoky feminine voice came from my left. “So. Do you know the Reverend Robertson personally?”
Damn! I grimaced and looked down at the scarred wood of the bar. I must have said that out loud.

Slowly turning my head to the side, I expected to see a Brunhilde type but was stunned to find a long-haired brunette knockout staring at me with startling grey-blue eyes. Wow! Carol, who?

As she studied me, amusement gleaming from her mesmerizing eyes, her pretty head cocked and resting on her fist, her lips formed a lopsided smile. I was dumbfounded.

My eyes drifted, taking in dark tanned skin contrasting sharply with the orange and yellow print halter and skirt that left her midriff exposed to my scrutiny. A diamond and pearl pin adorned her navel. Her bare thighs and calves were lithe but shapely with beige canvas two-inch wedge sandals on her narrow feet. Gotta love Las Vegas in July! A hundred degrees at midnight and beautiful near naked women.

Fortune Cookies, available now and Getting Naked at the Hilton, available soon from eXtasy Books

Dee Dawning
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